I personally have very high standards but this is just AMAZING for a first song!
The bass is just enough and not overwhelming. I really like the one part on 1:14! The melody i find crucial in all songs and i think you pulled it off wonderfully! The other melodies make the song sound full and not stale and that's a + in my book.
I also like the end a lot. It sounds (let's say) epic and that is just always the best ending for songs in my opinion. I would also really like that the song gets uploaded to Spotify and other platforms just so i can stream it, i will definitely put that on my playlist!
I look toward seeing you make more cool tunes in the future for us! You deserve the 5 stars!